Posts : 338 HWPoints : 2053 Join date : 2010-07-14
Subject: First in a long time Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:09 am
This is my first tag in a while. I know I still suck, but I also know that I have improved from my last pieces. Sorry Zeph I was to lazy to make the changes you told me about.
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Scrubby Lightning Thief
TDP4 Lead '10 : Posts : 783 HWPoints : 1387 Join date : 2010-08-14
Subject: Re: First in a long time Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:40 am
Pretty good start. Depth is messed up. Flow is alright, I like the tiles in the back. Should work more from that.
Avogadro Sʇǝɥdǝu
Funny Guy '10 : Posts : 645 HWPoints : 1884 Join date : 2010-07-24
Subject: Re: First in a long time Fri Dec 24, 2010 4:49 am
This shit is bananas. B-A-N-A-N-A-S
Darkprism Wizard of the Marsh
Posts : 583 HWPoints : 4558 Join date : 2010-10-06
Subject: Re: First in a long time Fri Dec 24, 2010 2:02 pm
Agreed that depth is all jank, but I like the little magma implosion doojigger in the middle. Since I couldn't do any of this, I have to say it's pretty well done.
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