my poetry!^^

The night wind blows as cold as stone.
the moon above is white like bone.

A heart with love leaves in a hurry.
a heart without love gives birth to furry.

For this is a tale of a girls love.
that came frome the sky above

There were angles in the warm bright light.
hovering over the beutiful sight.

this is another one i came up with

I'd give an arm or a leg just to be her
But in the end my eyes only blure.
To be the one you kiss and hold tight,
The one you think of day and night.
To hear you whisper in my ear,
To be the one tou wont to be near.

But i have left ur heart in pain and more,
Forever scard, Forever sore.
I played love with an unlucky hand,
Only time will make this mend.
It's my falt, i cannot lie,
But in the end i want to cry.

I hurt you, for a stupid wish and fals desire,
And now I've added fuel ta a raging fire.
I've found nothing but sweet sorrow and cheer,
But in the end it all will be clear.
I love you, but im far to late,
And for that I curse myself with undying hate.

For in the end, I know it's all true
For that i will never stop loving You.....

this last one wasnt about me it was about one of my freinds that told me a story about her and her bf so i wroght it for her. so what do u guys think bad, good...?

Reminds me of this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hXCKLJGLENs
Great poetry you have, I was never a good writer myself so i don't write much

thats the first time i herd that song and thx lol every one has there own talents what are u good at? btw whats the piic on the bottom off of?

I love it. I myself am something of a poet, and write quite often. I like the rhyme and meter of it, it shows good depth.

lol thx maby we can wright poetry together if u wont like give ideas or something and no im not being a creeper:P

I liked it!!!

My version of poetry:

Roses are reddish, Violets are blueish
If it wasn't for Jesus, we'd all be Jewish.

I'm more of a screenwriter or story-writer than a poem-writer.

Why does a heart without love have fur?

Gregtheking wrote:

Roses are reddish, Violets are blueish
If it wasn't for Jesus, we'd all be Jewish.

^^This.^^

Best poem I've ever heard in my life ROFL

lol its not fur its furry u no like hatred,madness stuf like that and i like the poem Gregtheking
and this is just a quik minit one i just now came up with so there might be changes

Dark creatures of the night
give birth to darkness sight
A goddess of light
screams for holy sight
blood sleghts threw the night
yip and yells of delight
drip by drip blood runs dry
feed no more creatures of the night

i think its kind of cheesy and i have no clue what its about just somethink i came up with in my sleepy state

Well done dude

(Lol, thx for those of you that liked it btw)

And Da-Pix, I like your poetry, but the spelling is REALLY bad (no offense...) Maybe go on word or something and click spell check?

i no the spellings bad and its kk i realy dont pay atenchen on how i spell things so yeah but it can be easily fixed;) and thx BMTH27 i got a qush. whts the points used 4?

Very nice.
Could have more poetic elements (metaphor, similies, personafication, etc) but it was really good yo

thx and yeah i can if u wont u can give me some subjects to wight about well evey one can give me subjects and should i just edit the first one and add my new poems there?

Yes. That would be great if you could add new poems to the first post for everyone could see.
Here is my topic: time

To answer your question. Points are used for
-new name
-user title. This goes below your name.

KK thx and ill start working on it^^